Hi!
Firstly, I’m impressed. You have a unique musical style. But I think the key point is “general commercial quality standard” here. Your music is so personal. Also there is a lot of themes, ideas in this track. You should make more simple compositions and your music has should have one or two themes. Because we compose music for media and our customers look for certain themes.
Here is my advices:
- Try to build a structure with more repetitions. ex: intro-verse-bridge-chorus-drop-verse-bridge-chorus-final
- Focus on one theme. Music is not the most advanced way to tell a lot of stories in one piece.
- Avoid long intros.
- Try most common chord progressions like (1-4-6-5)
- Listen more tracks on Audiojungle.
- Read this article: 5 point AudioJungle strategy
- Don’t stick on one track. Keep going composing and uploading. Get used to rejections.
Simple is the best!