Need feedback about my Soft Rejected PSD Template

Hlw,

I got soft reject in my PSD template. They provide some specific reason for rejection. They said there is problem in READABILITY, VISUAL HIERARCHY & SPACING AND ALIGNMENT. I fixed READABILITY but I need your help to improve others.

A redpen link I added below. Please give your valuable feedback.

https://redpen.io/qy5230ef19d9809228

Thanks in advacne