My template Landing HTML is Soft Rejected

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#1
  1. SPACING AND ALIGNMENT: There are spacing and alignment issues in this item. Please make sure that all elements are aligned properly and spacing is consistent from section to section. Here are some articles with more information regarding negative space and proper spacing: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/using-white-space-or-negative-space-in-your-designs--webdesign-3401,\ http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/adding-space-to-your-designs--webdesign-14836

  2. LINE LENGTH: To maximize readability, it’s recommended that you adjust the line length (measure) to not exceed 95 characters. Note that an ideal measure is between 45 and 75 characters in length.
    Ref:https://www.smashingmagazine.com/2014/09/balancing-line-length-font-size-responsive-web-design/

  3. The about section has parts that aren’t showing on first load. Please check and resubmit.

Please Help me.

Live Demo: http://html.erikaivo.info/eightflags/

Regards


#2

please help me thanks.


#3

Nothing help me :frowning:


#4

please help me because my template soft rejected message:

  1. THE CHANGES ARE NOT ENOUGH: Unfortunately, the changes are not enough and the previous review still stands. Please carefully check your item to make sure all problems were adequately addressed before resubmitting this item.

Please help me my first soft rejected thanks.


#5

Nothingggggggggg helpppppppppp meeeeee


#6

Hey jeri,

Here is some feedback for you :

  • Elements have to breathe more. Add some equal spacing / padding
  • choose between a person and a background image for the header, try varying images, choose image with which you can play with typography and negative space
  • buttons need to be a bit bigger and to be reworked. I don’t like the actual style, it is not modern.
  • colors are sad, find better associations
  • poor styles on the form, this needs a considerable amount of work, look for some examples on the web.
  • overall needs improvement in details and aesthetics. Try to offer more features than cloning the same page with bubbles, cubes etc…whatever . This is a boring approach. Make unique pages, not the same one with different effects in the header.

Look out about the responsive mode, your layout is moving (see screenshot)

Start with this and I hope other authors could help you point out other enhancements. Good luck !


#7

@cssninjaStudio
Many thanks I love you help me I will fix it, regards. :slight_smile:


#8

Overall nice work. However, you have to work for white spaces, negative spaces and all sections padding and margin.
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#9

Where spacing my template?
Where Line Length?

My html again soft rejected but not approved :frowning:

  1. SPACING AND ALIGNMENT: There are spacing and alignment issues in this item. Please make sure that all elements are aligned properly and spacing is consistent from section to section. Here are some articles with more information regarding negative space and proper spacing: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/using-white-space-or-negative-space-in-your-designs--webdesign-3401,\ http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/adding-space-to-your-designs--webdesign-14836

  2. LINE LENGTH: To maximize readability, it’s recommended that you adjust the line length (measure) to not exceed 95 characters. Note that an ideal measure is between 45 and 75 characters in length.
    Ref:https://www.smashingmagazine.com/2014/09/balancing-line-length-font-size-responsive-web-design/