Is this design suitable for uploading to ThemeForest?

Is this design suitable for uploading to Themeforest?
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It took me more than 3 years to develop myself and I am still trying to be better because there is always someone better than me.

I want someone who has more skills and experience than me to review it so that I can know my weaknesses and work on developing them again

Thank you for your time

@123Simples - My dear professor
@mgscoder - My dear professor

Waiting for your reply, my professor @123Simples

Waiting for your reply, my professor @mgscoder

Overall, It’s a good work.

There are couple of issues I notice:

  • Overuse of animations. For example, the flipping on the social icons. There’s too much going on in a small area.
  • Typography can be improved. For example, the process section titles are hard to read. It looks kinda blurry.
  • Circle cursor is stuck on the top left side of the screen while the page is loading.

Good luck! :slight_smile:

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Thank you very much for your nice comment. @FlaTheme :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

I am eagerly waiting for any positive comment or constructive criticism that will help me and teach me.

Thank you again.

If these points are modified, can I be accepted into Theme Forest?

I looked into your demo again, and notice couple more issues.

  • Responsiveness of hero section is not great on smaller screen desktops. It’s sticking too close to the sides with almost no space to breath.
  • Flip animations are outdated. I notice that they are on the resume section too.
  • The sliding text after the process(or services) section is almost transparent. I didn’t even notice it until I had a second look at it.
  • About section needs some optimizations. Too many font styles going on there.
  • Reduce the section paddings on smaller desktops
  • Typography is not consistent. You have wide text in header, and narrow in the rest of the sections.
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Your words make a lot of sense and I’m happy with them. @FlaTheme

You really lightened up the dark places in my imagination. :blush:

I will do all the changes you mentioned.

But you didn’t answer my question. Is it possible to accept it in the themeforest? :laughing:

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It has a potential. But, I couldn’t say anything about the approval

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I think you’d be lucky to get approved - the concept has been done thousands of times before and doesn’t really bring anything new or unique

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Sir @charlie4282 Greetings to you :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Thank you for the nice reply and you are definitely more knowledgeable and cultured than me and I definitely want to develop my skills more than that but I tried and failed and I am still trying and I will not give up until I reach the level of professionals.

So I want you to guide me to some points that I can focus on in the coming period :pray:

Thank you very much and I am happy with your words

Hi,

with respect, as far I have checked I would like to say:

  1. Menu hover (especially Portfolio) is not working correctly.
  2. Overuse of animations - You are beginner here better to keep small amount of animations.
  3. In trust section Number cutting edge is not a looking good.
  4. Text (like parahrapg) line-height: 1.9 !important; is not good. you can keep 1.6
  5. Heading (like: My Recent Works) cutting edge is not a looking good. Otherwise you can set Section hover instead of title hover.
  6. Portfolio details page font can be improved.
  7. Blog details page can be improved with sidebar.

Design concept is good, you can try with fixing the lack things. But I think need more aesthetics design.

Thanks

@mgscoder - My dear professor

First, I would like to tell you that your comments to me in the past months have led to my development and education and have instilled in me a great love for competition. If you saw my first design, you would laugh a lot. :laughing:

I hope you are doing well. :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

I will take into consideration all the points mentioned and try to think of fixing them in a nicer way.

What makes me very happy is the response to my questions. Thank you very much.

@SkewDiv

Thanks for thinking of me as a Professor - :slight_smile:

But you might not like my input :frowning:

I will give you my answer tomorrow my friend - it is 20.28 in the UK and I am for dinner LOL

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Of course my professor because I learn from you @123Simples

Also (@mgscoder & @charlie4282 & @FlaTheme )

Your words are very useful and have a great impact on me and others because you help for the sake of helping and not for money and certainly after writing your comment you will continue in your life and forget what you wrote but for me and beginners like me we take your words seriously and rethink for months every word or opinion from you.

In my religion (the best of you is the one who learns knowledge and teaches it)

Imagine that I do what you do but in a small community I receive messages from people I do not know and I give them advice and feel their joy in their writings because for them it is a shortcut to a long time that they may waste.

Thank you very much to everyone

I work hard alone, I search, read and apply to reach success, and I do not have specific steps to reach my goal. I did not find anyone to put the appropriate plan for me that teaches me how to start and finish in a short time, but I must swim in a sea of ​​information until I get a topic to start with. It is a struggle, my friend.

I have coded themes on ThemeForest for my friends and they were accepted and I share a small percentage of the profit. What I suffer from is design. It is really a talent that unfortunately I did not have. As for programming, it is my eternal love. I do not get tired or bored of it, and I enjoy solving its problems.

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Good! . Easy for submit

@SkewDiv

My advice start again. Spacing is off - see screenshots on desktop Firefox. I think that bubble thing on the mouse looks awful. I think it has a lot of potential but you need to make sure it looks as good it can do across multiple devices - which I agree is a tough ask - but nevertheless still needs to be done.

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Thank you for your time sir
You are absolutely right
I have made many changes I hope I succeeded this time
https://riley-nuxt.netlify.app/

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@SkewDiv

That looks so much better my friend - my only point would be (and wait for others to say too) is the logos you used on the homepage -

Smasung, Toyota, Addias - plus others are BRANDED NAMES and would result in a rejection.

Plus the pricing plans on homepage are out of alignment:

Apart from those 2 issues, I would think you would be good to go.

NOW whilst I think its a nearly great design, and would probably approve it, that doesn’t mean to say Envato will do the same. And herein lies the issues when authors ask forum members to give them pointers.

BUT don’t give up because you have worked so hard to improve this design. Well done :slight_smile:

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I am very happy with this answer sir :handshake:, thank you very much. I will not blame you or anyone for approval or rejection, but I have to try a million times to succeed and I will not stop even if I am rejected by Envato, I will try again and will not give up.

I will adjust the points you mentioned again and take some opinions again until I reach an excellent result and then upload it immediately.

And me and my destiny

Life looks more beautiful with people like you. @123Simples :pray:

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Hey bro, I want to say your theme is really cool and really unique!!!, I noticed something bad happening in Themeforest, I have a lot of item rejections without reviewing item demo preview! I have analytics telling me who visited my site, and when I called for help, it said “Your item has already been rejected” ! Although it is a new item and I cannot understand what happened, so i think your item is not reviewed at all! because your item deserves to be approved, now what i am doing is knowing what happened!