[Hard rejected] Cinematic titles template


#1

Hello, my After Effects project https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JCG6_nuzBu8 was rejected. Would be thankful for any possible idea why this happened.


#2

The font is a bit basic, the text is too large, there’s not enough text for a title item and too much text for a logo sting item, the camera moves need a bit of work, I think the depth of field is maybe a bit extreme, the colours need a bit of work and the background should be separate from the individual scene comps… at the moment I’m guessing it’s a separate background in each scene comp, which is why there’s a noticeable ‘jump’ in the background in-between each text segment.

That’s my opinion anyway. Good start though!


#3

You require lots of practice, look at top selling files, your work is very very basic.


#4

Thanks for your replies, will work on my mistakes!