Hard Reject - need a feedback

Hello to everybody. Got a Hard Reject.
Reason: Composition and Production.
So, As for me, it’s too repetitive(mean melody) - it applies to composition and arrangement.

Do any body have an ideas about what is wrong in production ? maybe something else in composition?


Try to improve your mix, the sound is dull, I know it can improve! :wink:
It’s pretty repetitive…

What do you mean by dull, could you explaine more detailed please.

I meant repetitive, Try varying a little more,
as for the sonority, it’s dark, opaque, maybe a brighter mix will help…

thank you!