Flyer rejected, why ?


I want your oppinion.
Why iā€™m rejected ? Please, thanx :smiley:


hi maybe sone guys will think that u have an issue of hierarchy, as for me i do not really think so , if u ask me this is just that your style looks a little bit too plain with this one, even if the design looks kind of clean , i guess they probably want u to bring a bit more originality and graphic work into it. I assume that making sure that your texts ans titles in particular spring out a bit more woudl be a good idea , too


Thanx man very much