Feedback needed before uploading

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Hi to All,
I need some feedback before uploading the theme, may be some advises :slight_smile:

Demos here: https://lunthemes.com/bakerydemo

Would be greate to hear some ideas how to improve this item…
Thanks in advance

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Hello,

There are some good ideas here and there, especially the hero images and headers. However the typography is not good (including hierarchy and typeface), there are problems with visual hierarchy and spacing. Colors would need some work too and some box design patterns are clearly outdated. Also check mobile menus which are a mess on certain displays.

Iam affraid you get a reject as is, but I may be wrong, this is just my opinion. Cheers mate.

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Hello,

you have done a good work but i think need to improved your item typography.
Make your item typography readable that people can read easily

Thanks

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Thank you very much for your advices, it’s very important for me.
Best regards

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Thank you so much! I’ll try to work on this :slight_smile:

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