Does it sound like a corporate track?


#1

Hello to everyone !! I was trying to make a corporate for the first time. the melody sounds wierd to me but i kind of like it.
Is it worth something on audiojungle? Can it be accepted?
https://soundcloud.com/kawward/co-1/s-1Wn4O


#2

To my mind idea not bad, but drums and mixing quality do not enough for AJ.


#3

Are the drum parts too simple ? Or the samples are bad?


#4

Drums sounds. )