This is my second forum topic here,
so please let me know if I’m doing something wrong
so I can learn from my mistake.
I saw topics about rejected items here,
and I never made a corporate track before,
so I thought I try to ask for improvement tips on my first corporate track
before I send it to the reviewers.
Here is a SoundCloud link:
Thank you very much for your help/tips!
Everybody have a great day!