Another tough rejected. Please, help.

Hello. I would like to ask you for advice and assistance in understanding the reasons for the rejected. Your opinion is very important. I do not have the opportunity to consult at home. I will be happy with the qualitative analysis of the tracks. Thank you.

This doesn’t sound like it was written with visual media in mind, more like something written for you own listening pleasure. Also, mixing and production is rather weak, particularly on the 2nd track.

And it is possible on more in detail about errors of mixing and production. Thank you.