Another rejection question

Hi,

This was admittedly my first attempt at audio jungle. Can anyone see why this was rejected though?

Thanks

Hej ryan6767,

Very nice musical ideas there, but I think your synth/chords in the beginning are too loud and your low end not tight enough.
Wish you sucess :wink:

Thanks very much. I’ll keep that in mind when I look over it again.

Regards,
Ryan Berry
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