Hello Friends, I am being little upset. Need to know whats wrong with this design. As I dont know whats the intention is.
I like it, I would push a bit all down though to have a more central title positioning and I tend to believe that maybe the things crossing the title are a bit decreasing the impact of it. However, I like the colorful aspect, the creativity , the sense of harmony of what u have here 
Thanks bro! 
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I wish I could help more, but I did my best lol