Hii designers,
i worked hard to do this flyer, i create this original car, photo manipulation to put it in the flyer, easy to change colors & organized layers.quality 300 Dpi. & finally i get rejection
I think you need to do something more with the large title, it looks under worked right now. Take a look at these designs I’ve done, see how I’ve done different things with the fonts, colours and layout. Something similar could work on your design. Curved text would be better as it matches other curves on the design. Main thing is that if you work some more on the typography you should be able to get it approved.
I think you need to organize a little more the footer text, add more textures and maybe give a little more depth to the sky, you could add some detail in the background, maybe some palm trees.
Something like this!..
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Thank you so much bro, curved text it fit well with the design, I did not notice this at the beginning, thank you very much for the benefit I will change and i will re-uploaded, and I tell you if it was accepted. Thanks 
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Thank you Bro yeah i think the background need more work, i will add some palms & texture & we see if will it be accepted, Thanks for the valuable tips bro, i appreciate this very much.
No problem. By the way I commented on your other flyer thread as well.
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yes i see it you are the best bro 
No problem, glad I could help. I’ll be interested to see your further developed designs.
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Hi again 
i did some changes in to the design, by keeping the same idea of the car, and it’s rejected again, so you think that the cause could be the car ? because it’s not real picture, it’s photo manipulation, i did it, or maybe the bag ? because it’s free picture ?
Don’t worry about the car, it looks great. You’ve improved the background also. But the problem is still the typography. You need to be careful with how much of an arch you give it, it’s distorted slightly in a way that doesn’t look too good. But the way you’ve laid out the words Summer Adventure Day, and the way adventure is smaller than Day… it just doesn’t look very good to me. You need to get each word interacting with the others more, they are just sitting there in a way that doesn’t mesh together well.
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Thank you bro you are an angel 
golden advices, i will apply & tell you thanks a lot bro, god bless you
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Feel free to post your updated flyer here, either before or after you upload it.
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Thanks bro, i did this, before uploading ! i want show you before uploading, i have deleted ‘‘Day’’ i kept just Summer Adventures ! Please, if i bother you, tell me, you helped me a lot and I do not want to bother you again my friend, You seem to be a good-hearted person who loves helping and sharing with others, god bless you, thanks thanks a lot my bro
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No problem, I quite enjoy giving advice on people’s designs. I’m improving all the time myself as well…
I’m afraid I don’t think it will be approved yet, there’s further to go with the typography. I think that font works for Summer, but for Adventures it’s a bit messy / less legible looking. Could be the styling with the thick outline is contributing to that, or could be it would be better to use another font for Adventures. But also the layout is a bit underworked, it could communicate a bit more info. If you look at my designs, there’s a bit more than just a simple title and all other info at the bottom. You’ve improved it since the first one, but unfortunately doing typography takes quite a lot of work sometimes. For me it’s the hardest part by a long way!