Why my PS Action rejected, please give me a feedback

Hello, everybody! My photoshop action just got hard rejected, I need some advice to improve my action, I need some advice for this item. Thank you so much.

hi this is hard to tell, especially as i am far form being an expert for these type of items, but i guess that maybe an issue of cutting the characters indeed , otherwise, i can only see a matter of presentation that could be really improved in my view, not about the screenshots but about the text part , te transition between screenshots and so on …

You also have a lot of major grammatical errors throughout the preview.