Want help and advice for rejected Logo reveal project

Hello,

I have done this logo reveal project which is rejected. Reason is very general, cant get the proper idea about it.

[https://drive.google.com/open?id=1xZ32mO0UNZ6VV5SjQNGw3zuwx4wL9uc0]

Please help me out !!
I would appreciate if i get proper response ! :slight_smile: Thanks