soft rejection ... please help.. i tried my best...

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My PSD template got soft rejection… Please help…

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  1. SPACING AND ALIGNMENT: There are spacing and alignment issues in this item. Please make sure that all elements are aligned properly and spacing is consistent from section to section. Here are some articles with more information regarding negative space and proper spacing: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/using-white-space-or-negative-space-in-your-designs--webdesign-3401, http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/adding-space-to-your-designs--webdesign-14836

  2. VISUAL HIERARCHY: The visual hierarchy of this item requires additional work. Focus on better defining which areas of this item should demand more attention and creating a logical structure to the design. For more information, please read: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/an-introduction-to-hierarchy-webdesign-14947

  3. TYPOGRAPHY: The template’s overall typography isn’t yet ready. It needs improvements in the styles it offers and general visual hierarchy.

here is my designs:

02_home-page
02_home-page.jpg1920×8144 3.33 MB
03_home-page
03_home-page.jpg1920×6846 3.02 MB
04_home-page
04_home-page.jpg1920×6811 2.86 MB

Please give suggestions and feedback of what you think can be improved.

Thank you