Soft Rejected - spacing and alignment & typographic hierarchy

Hi !
I have submitted a HTML template in themeforest. It got soft reject.


Reviewer said:

  1. There are spacing and alignment issues in this item. Please make sure that all elements are aligned properly and spacing is consistent from section to section. Here are some articles with more information regarding negative space and proper spacing: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/using-white-space-or-negative-space-in-your-designs–webdesign-3401, http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/adding-space-to-your-designs–webdesign-14836

  2. The typographic hierarchy of this item requires additional work. For more information, please read: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/understanding-typographic-hierarchy–webdesign-11636


Here our demo: http://vanves.eb2a.com/

Can anybody please show me what should I change? how they check Spacing and alignment of a template?

Thanks a lot!!

Hello!

First of all, if you want to get approved (and have sales after approval), you should make your item more attractive. Now it’s too static and a bit boring (sorry to say that).

Below is my quick review for your item, in terms of spacing, alignment / typographic hierarchy.

  1. One main issue. Top-bottom spacing issue. Make the spacing equal

  2. Add some sort of dark overlay between texts and background image, to increase the contrast of the text

  3. Spacing issue

  4. Make paragraph color lighter. Increase the font-size of Our Team title

  5. Spacing issues
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  6. Make top-bottom spacing the same:

  7. Make the overlay darker to increase the readability
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  8. I would group these sections as 3x different sections, by increasing the spacing between them. Because now this view looks so crowded.

  9. Missing favicon?!

  10. Bullets between nav items are not aligned
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  11. Make these titles bolder

  12. Major click flickering issue on navigation. Is this a bug or a feature?!image

That all for the moment. By not fixing/improving these points will lead to many other soft rejections or even a hard rejection.

Good Luck!

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Thank You So Much

The Template is Now On ThemeForest :blush:

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