Soft Rejected - Can anybody give some reccomendations?


My item was soft rejected - Pool - Responsive HTML5 Template

3. The typographic hierarchy of this item requires additional work. For more information, please read:

  1. Visual hierarchy needs improvement: focus on better defining which areas of this item should demand more attention and creating a logical structure to the design.
    For more information, please read: An Introduction to Hierarchy

  2. There are spacing and alignment issues in this item. Please make sure that all elements are aligned properly and spacing is consistent from section to section. Here are some articles with more information regarding negative space and proper spacing: Using White Space (or Negative Space) in Your Designs, Adding Space to Your Designs

Can you give me some exact advices - what and where is wrong?
Thank you.

Best regards,

It’s hard to give advise on this one as I don’t know know which section is more important than the other, usually above the fold section is the most important and need to stand out. to do that use: Size, Perspective, Color and Spacing. and keep on doing the same for on the rest of the page.

Example: You are using 18px font size for your menu links and also for the slider text, either reduce your menu links size or increase the slider text size