seaking feedback on my rejected project

I didn’t upload any project long time ago, my this project was rejected, I really want some critic on my work. what to do?

Thanks in advance!!


ANYBODY? I NEED FEEDBAAACK.Give me some ideas, please.

I’m certainly not a videohiver, but it seemed to me that in the video everything happens too fast, the frames change, there are effects + there is information in the form of text. It is difficult to perceive this as a whole. Also it seemed to me that the ending is too sharp.

thank you for ctitic