Need Design Feedback

Hello.
I would like to submit my first template, but I’m sure that will not be accepted.
I am a novice in web design and I need some advice from experts like you to understand my mistakes.
Your advice of web design expert will allow me to understand the mistakes. Please a little help.

For a personal satisfaction for me it is very important to be able to release a valid template.

This is the link.

Thank you so much for spending your time for me.

You need to work with typography and paddings. Whole template looks good, but there are many little issues to fix, like cartoon quotes on testimonials block or extremelly big product names in shop.

Thanks for your feedback. For me it is very important