Flyer rejected, I ask the help of professionals, to point out my mistakes.

Hello, I’m new to this business, do not judge strictly :slight_smile:
On the flyer, I ask to point out my mistakes, that next time I did not repeat them

It’s a good start, but it needs to be developed further. Browse through lots of similar flyers on graphic river and you should get ideas for improving it.

The text is too big in comparission with the rest of the elements.
The SOUND text you should leave it editable.
Add some new effects because the circle with text and smoke is way overused. Add something new. Instead of the smoke you can add some shapes and depth to the flyer. Just a thought.


Thanks a lot for the advice, I’ll will try.