Recently I made 2 logo reveals, one which i can understand why they rejected but the second one was pretty surpising. Not sure what I got wrong, and of course I got the typical messege without any specifics, so that tells me nothing, I hope that you guys could give me some feedback.
Here is the one that surprised me:
And the second one which I understand why they have rejected, feedback still would be appriciated tho:
Thanks for your time!