What with this composition? I need an advice

Do not publish the song. Why?


The left hand needs to play “chords”. I don’t want to sleep under your melody.

I´m afraid to link. :joy:

I agree with @EvgenM… I think this song needs some more harmonies and variations… all the piece is the same chord and this need some chord combinations.
Still, I think your work is based from a nice idea that needs some evolution.
Just my opinion :smiley:
and good luck!

Nice (artistic) idea and I think the piece gets a big lift with nice chords.

Thx for all comments. I 'll be work by this composition)