What is wrong with PROJECT?


I do not understand

Please help


hi buddy well indeed if u ask me i do not understand what the concept is and i guess that it did not help you to get approved … after that the thin lines are unbalanced / uneven and utter glowing are lacking fitness if u ask me. for the drawings inside what seems to be eyes , they are really great but i have a bit trouble to understand who this item is addressing and what for … maybe this is the main thing that u have to work on …