hi buddy well this is issue is quite incredible! they approve and then come back, i cannot identify how this is possible … . Besides your work is cool, which doesn’t mean this is perfect all eth same and yes they are also right there are some thing to fix when it comes to both organization a bit and typo things too. For me, if there’s no problem at all about the main font combination (titles), u need to make sure to arrange in a better way the footer. By the way, i am not sure that putting so many DJs is such a good idea, but u may do with it if u really want to keep them, u just need to find a way to place things ipso that it looks visually attractive and looks well organized there. You should in particular try to place the longest text in the middle to ensure more balance.
As for what i identify part of your problem is the sort of slope that have with main titles as giving titles an angle will not help you to arrange other texts tastily but this is working well like this and u need to find a way to arrange additional texts indeed.
One of the problem is also that the date is not springing out when people would like to have it noticed and if u just display edges of it, this is hard to read in the end … .
I would personally recommend that u associate the date with the name of the club on top of the flyer or least if u wanna keep it the same place that u align it horizontally with Christ. I think that the date should also be in the same typo as the company’s name by the way to create more harmony again indeed.
To get into further details and to really take your item to the next level, u may also choose to change the typo for “party” and elect one even better looking and try to bring a small effect on this one.
I would also personally set the company name in white or in the same kind of style as “party”, it may look not springing out this much in the screen in a way but white is popping out much much more when printed and once printed it should be quite cool
Just keep in mind that here typo is much of an issue until they almost sometimes forget about the other things, which is also discussable , but this is the way things go and u (we all by the way) have to do with it …