Template Rejected - PLEASE HELP

I have worked very hard on creating this template. PLEASE HELP me on how to make this better so this can be improved and it doesnt go to waste.
I have synced the audio perfectly - I am giving 4K footages as Bonus and this is a good teaser template with Modular Structure for future changes if anyone wants to do that.
Please give me some advice on what to do to make this better and to resubmit for approval.

LINK - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4XDr2fibnV0

Hi, maybe you should do more animation different in plexus !? it’s the same for many words. best