Soft Rejected - typographic hierarchy visual hierarchy spacing and alignment typeface fonts & line height

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Reviewer said:
Thank you for your submission.

  1. TYPOGRAPHIC HIERARCHY: The typographic hierarchy of this item requires additional work. For more information, please read: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/understanding-typographic-hierarchy--webdesign-11636

  2. VISUAL HIERARCHY: The visual hierarchy of this item requires additional work. Focus on better defining which areas of this item should demand more attention and creating a logical structure to the design. For more information, please read: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/an-introduction-to-hierarchy-webdesign-14947

  3. SPACING AND ALIGNMENT: There are spacing and alignment issues in this item. Please make sure that all elements are aligned properly and spacing is consistent from section to section. Here are some articles with more information regarding negative space and proper spacing: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/using-white-space-or-negative-space-in-your-designs--webdesign-3401,\ http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/adding-space-to-your-designs--webdesign-14836

  4. TYPEFACE: The choice of typeface should support the purpose of the design and by extension, the needs of the intended audience. Ref: https://designschool.canva.com/font-design/

  5. FONT COMBINATIONS: It’s recommended that you pair complementary fonts that add to the design aesthetic you’re going for. In general, a design should utilize less than three (ideally two) font variations that each compliment another — not compete for attention. Ref: https://designschool.canva.com/blog/the-ultimate-guide-to-font-pairing/

  6. LINE HEIGHT: To improve readability, please adjust the line height of the following text elements. Ideally, line height should be unitless. Ref: https://www.smashingmagazine.com/2009/08/typographic-design-survey-best-practices-from-the-best-blogs/#6-optimal-line-height-for-body-copy

Here is demo http://www.demo.templateever.com/template/magi/

Can anybody please show me what should I change?
Thanks a lot!!

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Hello and welcome to Envato Forums!

As I see you got a well explained soft rejection message from the reviewer (you are lucky :slight_smile: ). Do you need help on every single point?

Regards

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Thanks a lot for your reply . I am very new and this was my 1st item . I will work for change . but before if you help me on every single point then it will be very help full for me . Thanks a lot for your help .

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and I want to change the template name also and want to change demo image for demo is it possible now when I submit ?

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I am waiting for your reply . then will start work . Thanks a lot for your help .

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are you there ?