New track - please Help!

Hello everybody!
I create new track. And I need your advices. Tell me please something about my new composition.

Hi very nice and well played. The second half sounds way better than the first.

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Very well done. Clean and simple with a solid build up that feels organic. I see this having a lot of commercial value.

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Thank you! :blush:
I always doubt my new tracks. So your advice is very important for me.