I need your opinion about this rejected track

I got a rejection. Please tell me what you think about it:

Thank you in advance!

Bloggers often use this kind of music when they do something. the last part of the piano spoils the comic mood translating it into a sad.

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Thank you! I thought a lot about the melody. I thought it might be a little to “bluesy”, but I had to take the track somewhere… I’m going to think about this…
Thank you very much!

Is there anything else? Maybe about the mix or some other aspect of the composition?