I need your opinion about this rejected track

Envato Authors AudioJungle
1

Hi,
I got a rejection. Please tell me what you think about it:

Thank you in advance!

2

Bloggers often use this kind of music when they do something. the last part of the piano spoils the comic mood translating it into a sad.

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3

Thank you! I thought a lot about the melody. I thought it might be a little to “bluesy”, but I had to take the track somewhere… I’m going to think about this…
Thank you very much!

4

Is there anything else? Maybe about the mix or some other aspect of the composition?