Give feedback for my logo rejection

My logo was rejected please give me suggestions for improvement. thanks

please guide me how can I further improve myself, if I need to see videos on graphic designing or want to need books, can you refer me this content related about it. you are experienced and I am new kindly give suggestions about this. thanks

It’s called “teaching” and you’d need lots of practice. You can check Tut+ and other website for the tutorials/lessons.

ok thanks.