I think you need to do better arrangement and mix (maybe replace some samples). Also it’s impportant to create more natural ending (with verb tales or fade out). Hope it helps you!
Thanks for the advice
Hello! I redid the another track. What do you say?
To my mind sound is very agressive, lead sound at 0:35 is very raw and loud. Also I think that fashion tracks must be more background. Melody is very positive for fashion project. Maybe it’s better to play calm melody, neutral, not so happy.
Hello! Thank you for your advice
Hi @mraleks2015, I am listening “Modern Fashion”, I think you should modernize it with some modern melodies, also maybe you should try some other libraries. I hope this was helpful to you.
Thank you very much