Your uploaded ítem rejected!!!

Envato Authors AudioJungle
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Hello mates!

I received the following message …
Unfortunately your submission Motivation 2016 isn’t ready for AudioJungle and cannot be resubmitted as it did not meet our minimum requirements for quality and/or Envato Market policies. In order for submissions to be considered for sale they must be of high aesthetic and technical quality, unique to our library and cannot be in violation of Envato’s policies.
Regrettably the Help and Quality Teams are unable to offer a critique or feedback on your rejected submission.
Please see our Help Center for more information: https://help.market.envato.com/hc/en-us/articles/204067134
Our Review team also provided these comments:
_ This submission does not meet AudioJungle’s commercial production (samples/recording/mixing/mastering) standard, and its commercial composition/arrangement standard, unfortunately._

I’m new to AudioJungle but it is also true that I have worked hard in the composition, mixing and mastering of this song. For this reason I have some difficulties to understand the message.
Maybe you are forgetting something further that I will continue working hard to keep learning.
Besides, I will put here the song if you can listen and tell me if you are agree with the message or as it could be improved, or otherwise, this song needs a lot more work still

I’ll keep working on it, but, you know if you can back up the same song or improved slightly changed?

Thank you

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in my opinion the intro is long, maybe the velocity of the piano is a little repetitive, try to do it longer, not just one bar and then paste it again, also I think your sound it’s a little progressive, it has to be simpler in my humble opinion, well, best for next tracks.

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I agree with legnazeg about the intro and piano. Try to cut down the intro to max 10 seconds or add the guitar from the start. The piano part sounds copy/pasted. Try to record the whole piano part to make it less static and to make it sound less quantized. I personally dont like the synth brass pad you add when the guitar enters and strings sounds fake and lifeless.
You should also consider adding some more reverb, it sounds a bit too dry now, in my opinion. I would also skip the stop towards the ending.

I actually think its a very nice composition but in the current state maybe not as useful for the customers of AJ as it could be.

You are allowed to upload a track again if you have made significant improvements and changes.

Hope this helps and good luck!

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Hello!
I agree with legnazeg and Hyperpod.
There is no dynamics and any sustains in piano, you should improve it.

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Thank you very much mates!
While the lack of dynamic is not the main problem I’ll have this, I shall follow the advice (intro, sound quality, shape, etc …) to continue working.
Thank you

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you’re welcome mate!