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Friends, I need your help again! What is wrong here?

Vst sounds like midi, drums and that “piano” maybe that? As well as maybe it is too repetitive.

Apparently, the poorly selected vst plug

The mix is a bit bland, beat needs more punch and the sounds are a bit static. The composition needs to evolve and provide more variety. You could try throwing in some lo-fi grit, dirt and pump at some point, it’s hip hop after all.

I played around with some effects on your stereo mix, tried to make it sound more “street”. Not that I know anything about what “street” sounds like on this side of the 90’s :sunglasses:

For fun and inspiration :thumbsup:

https://soundcloud.com/stockwaves/y-1