I agree with Fanki to an extent, BUT, I wouldn’t say “band songs” are bad for commercial usage. No, they won’t sell in corporate numbers but many buyers want more authentic “real” music to use with their videos. There is definitely a market for that in the licensing business (I sell stuff like that myself). And even though AJ might not accept even a perfectly mixed “band track” many other sites most certainly will.
But, the real problem here is the mixing. They sound like demos and have an overall muddy sound. I think your playing is really great and very tight (contrary to many accepted tracks here)…