Would you review a rejected track?

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#1

Hello,

When I look back to this track I see that reverb is too much and I will fix it.
What else would you suggest?

https://soundcloud.com/tfiratoglu/pulsing-piano

Do I do something wrong about the following principle:

Each instrument or musical element should have its own area or respective frequency range.

This is the rejection feedback:

This submission does not meet AudioJungle’s commercial production (samples/recording/mixing/mastering) standard, and its commercial composition/arrangement standard, unfortunately.

Thanks by now.


#2

Hi, in my opinion a little bit gloomy background, and track the total harmony.


#3

Definitely agree with @MikhailGraydMusic . Just too much of background pad, track also seems a bit disconnected from it parts. I can’t catch any emotion of it, is it sad or anxious? You really need to reconsider your arrangement. I’d say forget about this track and try to make another one. Sorry to say that, it’s just my opinion. Good luck with it! :wink: Fight!