Would this pass review

Once again thanks for the reply. I looked around GR in the flyers category, and saw some very “plain” stuff being approved, whereas as you mentioned, my stuff is too plain for GR which I can understand as I am not a professional designer, but a self taught designer working for a design company.

If you don’t mind, can you also look at this (My submission got rejected and was wondering why) and tell me if it’s the same issue? Thanks for your feedback