Would be VERY Grateful for some Feedback - New to the Community - Saxophone Party

Hi everyone. I’m new here. I’ve been laid off for months due to COVID and found music as an important outlet the last few months. I work full time as a video produce but have a background in music. I really want to start producing more music for use in my own videos and would love to turn this into something more.

This is an epic saga type of track that I’ve been working on for a few days. I know it’s long but I intended it that way for editing purposes. The vision was to channel my favorite happy moments of life. To embrace change but close a chapter on the past. Couldn’t help but picture the ending of Top Gun while composing. Had to include an extended romantic guitar/sax solo haha

Not sure if this would get approved for sale and I know everyone wants feedback, but if anyone cares to take the time, hearing some constructive remarks would be super helpful.