I think that will approved it but I am not sure.
nice your job.
Is it a flyer design or a mockup?
#XioxGraphix, Flyer design.
hi for me there are many observations to do on this one, as there are things to fix, improve or things like this … first of all i highly recommend to try o avoid having texts crossing pictures as text are hardly readable when so … in most cases they will lack of contrast and surely not pop out enough and fail to be readable enough as well . in this case, this is still rather readable but that could be better all the same …
otherwise, in terms of global style , i think that the organization s too crammed , there are too many elements everywhere , this is lacking of white space and breathings, not to mention that blocks of data in the back look too much like blocks, they should be smaller, if u ask me and u should bring them closer from each other … the gutter in the middle being too wild , which is not aesthetics and makes people feel like that they are disconnected , hence a loss harmony …
finally the typo is a bit too flat lacking somehow some way originality, variations and font combinations so that u have more relief and a better hierarchy of information, too
How looks your design, its not matter, If reviewer will kindly faver you then it will approve. Otherwise no values of designer time and afford.
Final result is REJECTED.
I think that already have other item on graphicriver for so hard rejected