Cool Idea, the melody is good, but the whole mix sounds a little bit poor and weak. just make the sound more rich, a bit more high frequencies, add background sounds and add some percussion
In the audio world everything is relative.
I heard the first release and I like it.
Then I listen to the new mix… and I like it much more!
Yes, probably the intro is a bit too long.
Good luck!
@Sidice I like the track but I think on this can work to have something more atmospheric. At first time I like the sounds, but after a few more listenings I think can work some subsonic effects for this track
I am very curios if the remix can be accepted, if yes than GLWS, if not you can try to make more dynamic.