hi for me the logo does not offer impact enough , so to speak. I tend to believe that the connection between text and illustration is not optimal say the least and that apart from the global harmony issue , the text part is quite simple and sort of a bit tasteless. I have to remind u also that the preview file is not a small deal, this is the other way around. This is the interface between u and your work and the reviewer and potential buyers so that u need to make sure that this is as impacting as possible and as harmonious , too … here , in the black and pink preview, both part look disconnected , one having a color and the other one having a completely distinct color and there is no reminder anywhere …
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