Why the product is rejected

aftereffects

#1

Preview


#2

You can not ask somebody to taste your cookie when you bring them only a crumb.


#3

Where is the video ???
How we can see it ?


#4

#5

It has a nice intro. But there is a cut between first and second shot that i guess is not ok. Maybe you should work more on the reveal and perhaps on more environment details too. Just an opinion, I hope it helps.
Good Luck!


#6

Plus the frame from 0:09 where the chain looks too simple when it’s dragging that logo. Try to enhance that segment of the animation.


#7

To me the purpose for this animation is not clear. A 3D chain pulling a logo in the sky (?) that is not 3D as well doesn’t make much sense to me.

The way the chains fit doesn’t make much sense too.
I guess you’re focusing too much on visuals but without having a clear objective for your animation.


#8

Thank you for all the best advice. I wish you many sales