Why My template is rejected ?

Can any one help me to my mistake on this template,

can any one give me a clear points. what mistake i have done in this template. so that i can
understand my mistakes. and improve my self on the next template. please help bro

It’s boring - and shows no quality in the video. It could have been done by anyone using a cheap program software. Having said that, it does not mean you as an author are rubbish - you should be aiming for quality and something that looks great and outstanding. I could find something like this on pexels or fiveer