Hello, i’m a beginner player in this graphic river and need ur opinion, master :((((
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hi well for me there are a variety of reasons for your logos to be hard rejected indeed … so here we go
1- proportion
if u ask me the proportion between texts and illustration is not the right one, at this stage the illustration is definitely prevailing over the texts , u should have a more balanced combination in my view …
2- typo
sorry to say just that but as regard to how much typo is an important issue here , the fact of the matter is that u are not close from required standards at the moment … u need to introduce more originality , more variations and more font combinations indeed, it will also help u to take your item to the next level in terms of hierarchy
3- hierarchy
honestly , right now this is basically too flat , u need to make sure that u make your logo grow more consistent out of playing more with illustration, typo , colors and so on so that a real relief is emerging out of it …
4- contrast
this is a basic design principle that u are somehow some way breaking right now … u fail at this stage have enough contrast between the logo and the background , which basically flattens all the work that u have done, presentation matters much and all details matter as well, especially when they are put two on two together with other things and issues …
5- limited commercial potential
i am sorry to tell u just this but choosing a combination of two letters like this is not a good idea, this is decreasing the commercial potential of your item as it basically means that the buyer would have to have both initials in common with what u have here , that they like it and want to buy it …
6- global style
this is too bad, with the base that u have here u had the opportunity to create something a bit more modern in terms of style, using more the pathfinder and shapes being withdrawn from others like most of the trendy logos nowadays … but u could not quite “connect” to the concerned style
7- harmony and combination of colors
u have really suprising colors sometimes in your preview, some colors coming out of the blue and that u are really not matching with the rest … think of your logo as a whole where harmony has to transpire from …
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thank u dude <3
btw i really interested to selling my project in gr. n i always improve n do better by critic of my design.
then, i try to upload my second logo design but the happen is got rejected again 
(sad)
but it’s ok, mybe that my project design is under standard quality of GR
this is my second design that rejected, please gimme reason why this design got hard rejected. i saw many design in GR that same in case of my design that accepted but my design not accepted. Thanku dude ure good person! <3
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This is a nice concept.
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hi for me this is quite cool to say the least … i would just say that maybe bringing a bit more originality, variations and font combinations in the typo would be welcome and u also, maybe, having the back part of the boat a little bit upper and contrasting a little bit more with the other part of the vessel … otherwise i have no idea what about what is wrong with this one, check also for the tagline, some people say this is optional , in the past it was required … so hard to tell …