hi here are a collection of observations regarding reasons for this item to be hard recjedt, of things for u to fix and improve …
1- presentation
sorry to say just this but the bottom line is that the presentation that u have here “is not selling” what u have created … use mockups, try to integrate them in a really professional lay out so that people feel impressed with what u have …
2- trademarks
at this stage u are using a copyrighted logo or trademarked, i am not sure but what is crystal clear is that u have no right to display in my view … and this may not be a rejection for hard rejection but combined with other things it may turn a soft rejection into a hard one “on aggregate”
3- typo
sorry to say just that but u have at this stage is super flat … there is nothing outstanding, no originality , this is lacking variations and font combinations … ps keep in mind that here , typo is much of an issue, maybe the most essential one indeed …
4- hierarchy
this is more or less linked to point 3 … the whole typo and document in a general way is lacking relief , u need to introduce some ways to your item pop out way much more and graduate between important pieces of information and secondary ones … at this stage all seems on the “same layer” so to speak …
5- readability
there are a combinations of factors for this but the fact of the matter is that the texts u have put are hard to read , choice of colors, shapes crossing texts and so on are all part of the issue that u have to deal with …
6- global harmony
i am sorry but i see no “guideline” here , it a bit like there is a whole lot of elements compiled without they have any relationship with these other … a bit as if they are pasted with each other without bringing a general coherence, u have to play with font styles, shapes and colors to create something kind of homogeneous that makes sense. Look! for instance the pictures that u used in top , whether they are colorful black and white or whatever , there is not incidence on the page …
7- colors
think about complementary colors or scales of colors, there has to be a logics between the colors that u use and there is an ultimate goal for u to create harmony and following some rules is probably the best for u to make sure that u can reach this target …
8- curves
they are overused , not original to say the least according to how many times people have been using them and in addition they are everything but convenient to use in a global lay out , besides u did not manage to extract yourself from this trap as your difficult time to organize the page is transpiring from what u have right now , so just opt for something else than the concerned curves indeed …