I thought this piece was going to be a success but item has been hard rejected. I’m waiting for your comments on this subject. Thank you all.
Item link here: https://soundcloud.com/user-258122765/acoustic-uplifting-inspiring
Off the top of my head, l’m thinking: the only variation begins in the 3rd quarter, which is over a minute into the track?
the drums are so weak for my opinion ,make a stronger kick for it , otherwise everythig is alright
For me variation (piano melody) not big problem. This is only a little suprise in the form.
Drums are weak. I think it sounds like something is missing - maybe the drums or some arrangements. Good luck 
Keep working
I still don’t agree with you that the drums are weak. Thank you and good luck to you, too.