why my flyer design hard rejected?please give me your opinion

[ipong13]

idk why my design rejected… is my first upoad for graphicriver this about technical problem?or just a bad design?

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[Grandartist]

I like this but need more authenticity to present

[DesignSomething]

Your flyer looks too busy and the typo combination doesn’t work well. Also the lightning effect looks fake. When you add a light source into your scene all the elements need to receive light and cast shadows.
Check this painting and imagine a pumpkin with light in the middle.