Hello people!
Please tell me what’s wrong here? Do the low frequencies stick out? Too many sub frequencies? Too much reverb?
I would be happy for your comments and advices.
Hey lalalune,
the track’s idea is so uplifting I admit.
On the other hand I think it’s a bit too bright overall and clipping at some sections.
Many elements are conflicting against each other (strings, piano). I agree with you the reverb on the piano might be a little bit too much. The riser and the cymbal at 0:29 sound too harsh.
The drums are also too much in your face, I think you need to play also with the velocity to give it the human feel, you are trying to emulate an orchestra 
One more thing but that’s speaking from a personal preference, I would use pauses to give space for the video editor to have more flexibility. like the first part at 0:30 and at 1:27.
You are not far from having a licensable track. Keep up the good work and don’t give up! 
By the way, I do not have a lot of knowledge, I am speaking based on my own experience.
All the best!
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Hello, RedLeafMusic!
Thank you very much for the comment, advice and good constructive criticism. Your opinion helped me a lot. I made useful conclusions for myself.
I think you’re right. I agree with you that some elements contradict each other. I will try to do it easier and more balanced.
Drums are my weakness. I will try to develop my skills in the subject of percussion.
Especially thanks for the advice about pauses for the video editor, because I did not think about this earlier.
Thanks for the time and attention!
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