maybe the guitar with the delay effect in the beginning sounds a tiny bit lost with the huge break before the next guitar sound comes in?
To me the kick sounds way to heavy. The glitch effects are nice, but maybe too experimental to AJ reviewers? Just a guess, though. According to my taste the piece could have been longer as well! (-;
I am not sure. Maybe too short?
I think in general this sounds quite good to me already. It sounds like a demo only. So I would say it’s too short as well. Like it is now it seems to me that there is more to come in this piece, but suddenly it ends. It’s just a guess, though!
The bass seems to hevay to me. It seems to push every other voice back in the mix. Another thing again: too short maybe?
Most of your tracks seem like “demos” to me. Maybe this could be a main reason of the rejection. If you really want to have the pieces short think about the “dramatic structure” of the tracks. Like it is now most tracks sound like they end with some kind of climax and should continue to “resolve” the piece.
Again: it’s just a guess. Good luck! (=