The theme looks good:
- good typo, seems solid in terms of spacing, readability, but I will tell you later what I don’t like about
- I like the features alot, I believe this must be a fork of the Scratch theme?
- the general look and feel seems well balanced
I don’t like
- those headings with green backgrounds stand out too much, it’s like I’m looking at a game menu and not a content website, the design is good, I would use it for buttons instead
- the logo looks like a 5 seconds mock-up
- logo spacing also seems incorrect
- headings line height (I know this is crazy, I take calculator and take it all to last pixel)
- headings letter spacing: it just doesn’t help the chosen font to lead properly because the default browser rule value
- headings seem to have a render issue because you are using a google font without it’s bold variant, they just don’t look pixel perfect on my screen, I strongly believe this must be related to the issue reported on the Unyson issues page
- images look fine but they don’t seem to connect with or relate to a certain domain
- the main slider’s dots navigation create too much white space, if you don’t see them in the first 2-5 secs, it looks like a glitch
- the spacing isn’t good enough because those green backgrounds all over the place make it all feel stretched inside
- something about contrast isn’t right, the first thing I don’t like is also related, perhaps because the above
There could be more things to consider, perhaps fixing the above would diminish anything else.
Best of luck